tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post7589578371010435277..comments2023-04-01T13:10:51.706-07:00Comments on Heaven's Legacies: Chapter 6-2: Good Girls Go Bad, Part 1heavenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05461257842343457492noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-8419826556236120792013-07-16T07:32:41.099-07:002013-07-16T07:32:41.099-07:00I adore Kieran. I really want him to have a happy ...I adore Kieran. I really want him to have a happy ending and thought about using him a little more in-depth for my story. But, my roll does not really lead to happiness and he deserves it. So he can play the happy, well adjusted best friend! heavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05461257842343457492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-34416997708320128552013-07-10T22:11:17.984-07:002013-07-10T22:11:17.984-07:00I finished Colleen's story right before I star...I finished Colleen's story right before I started catching up on yours and I seriously squealed when I saw Kieran. It was great to see him in your story and you wrote him beautifully. <br /><br />Oh Evangeline. What am I going to do with you girl? She just needs to leave the booze alone. It get's her into too much trouble. <br /><br />I think I'd like to see Emerson and Renata give it a go. I think they'd make a cute couple. JessicaxRockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596780597892263881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-50923820559015728562013-06-02T16:30:50.829-07:002013-06-02T16:30:50.829-07:00You're right. Neal voiced his concerns about h...You're right. Neal voiced his concerns about her going so far away though I'm sure he never imagined this would be one of the things he needed to be concerned about. It's sad that his concerns really were well founded and sad about what that means for their marriage.heavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05461257842343457492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-50828984146941710042013-06-02T16:27:56.482-07:002013-06-02T16:27:56.482-07:00Poor Neal. He has no idea what's going on and,...Poor Neal. He has no idea what's going on and, even though he didn't want her to go so far away, he supported her. She'll have a lot of explaining to do, if she decides to go through with it.heavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05461257842343457492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-16721865969497024672013-06-02T16:26:36.256-07:002013-06-02T16:26:36.256-07:00I think it's relatable on a lot of levels. I, ...I think it's relatable on a lot of levels. I, too, have been in a similar situation so, in a way, it's easy for me to write Evangeline though, like you, I wasn't married at the time so she's in a much tighter pickle than I was. <br /><br />Jeffrey is a pretty big douchetard. He knew she was married and pretty much set out to seduce her. When they were interrupted he was none too pleased. There's a little more information about that from a third party in the next chapter.<br /><br />Em and Renata, those two. <3 Also more on that in the next chapter. heavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05461257842343457492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-73422569416759400672013-06-02T16:22:35.067-07:002013-06-02T16:22:35.067-07:00Emerson and Renata really do need to work things o...Emerson and Renata really do need to work things out one way or another. That will be even more obvious in the next chapter.heavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05461257842343457492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-51669190257071084972013-06-02T16:21:42.595-07:002013-06-02T16:21:42.595-07:00Haha, she IS always cranky! She got the grumpy tra...Haha, she IS always cranky! She got the grumpy trait as a child and lives up to it! heavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05461257842343457492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-88825718102361138882013-06-02T16:20:57.655-07:002013-06-02T16:20:57.655-07:00Gasp! You actively hoped for a ginger to win? Tres...Gasp! You actively hoped for a ginger to win? Tres surprised!<br /><br />You're certainly right; she's not being fair to Neal. She's not really being fair to anyone right now really. heavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05461257842343457492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-44865273289911689272013-06-02T16:18:36.804-07:002013-06-02T16:18:36.804-07:00Yeah, this was a lot more serious than a kiss.Yeah, this was a lot more serious than a kiss.heavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05461257842343457492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-41852912740596964872013-06-02T16:18:14.180-07:002013-06-02T16:18:14.180-07:00I know! Kieran! He works so well here.
She really...I know! Kieran! He works so well here.<br /><br />She really does need to grow up a bit but right now she's every bit as Kieran described: selfish and confused. heavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05461257842343457492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-18702883328299696582013-06-02T11:10:40.452-07:002013-06-02T11:10:40.452-07:00I think Evey was not as ready to settle down as sh...I think Evey was not as ready to settle down as she thought she was. <br />I feel bad for Neal, there's no way this won't affect their marriage. Especially since he didn't even want her to Uni. Not that she should have stayed home to please him. But, from his point of view, her mediocre academic performance along with er partying and sleeping with another guy..well, you know.<br /><br />I still want to see Emerson and Renata get together. yangthecathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15083940950118677312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-57131558837381426432013-06-02T03:47:42.916-07:002013-06-02T03:47:42.916-07:00Oh dear, Evangeline's really screwed up this t...Oh dear, Evangeline's really screwed up this time, I hope she finds the courage to admit what she's done to Neal (whom I now feel very sorry for). It might end their marriage but if she never tells him then it's going to poison their relationship.AliHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15088235841224977814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-73079657770270419322013-06-02T00:35:20.194-07:002013-06-02T00:35:20.194-07:00Kieran! <3 <3 Recognized him immediately!
...Kieran! <3 <3 Recognized him immediately! <br /><br />Man, what a tough spot Ev is in. I've sorta been there, although I wasn't married. You get in this spot where you find yourself messing up and/or spreading your wings a little too far without meaning to, and fessing up hurts more people than just you or the other person. <br /><br />And ugh, I can't believe Jeffrey called her 'easy'. What a douchetard. Miles, was that the other guy? Ouch. What a mistake. I hope she continues being friends with Keiran though. Partly because he seems good for her in a friendly way, partly because I would then be able to look at him in two legacies :P <br /><br />I keep wondering if something is developing between Em and Renata. <br /><br />Wow, high free will. You are a brave woman. Catch ya next time!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-85560633904541701302013-06-01T20:48:00.317-07:002013-06-01T20:48:00.317-07:00Wow. Evangeline has a lot to explain to herself, a...Wow. Evangeline has a lot to explain to herself, and Neal. And I really hope Emerson and Renata come to an understanding of some kind soon. Either that they're just friends or something more I look forward to seeing them really talk to each other. <br /><br />Lol. The fighter roll seems to really fit Evangeline. ShakespearesSunshynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09019826982875949328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-75512065738753559902013-06-01T18:48:20.738-07:002013-06-01T18:48:20.738-07:00 It was neat to see Kieran make a cameo appearance... It was neat to see Kieran make a cameo appearance! =)<br /><br /> Fighter roll seems to suit Evangeline, she always looks cranky too, lol I feel bad for both her and Neal, they have a long road ahead of them! <br />Nirarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15253184399668018141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-60222002084540264722013-06-01T16:37:06.803-07:002013-06-01T16:37:06.803-07:00I HAVE to stop jumping to conclusions! I thought E...I HAVE to stop jumping to conclusions! I thought Evangeline had been date raped D: and then that Keiran was really talking about Evangeline (I didn't realize he was from Buckley's story until I got to the comments). I was also thinking Em and Ren will end up together properly but the way it's going I'll be wrong about that too :p<br /><br />I have to agree with Buckley about it seeming very realistic. She reminds me a lot of myself at that age; getting trapped in a serious relationship too young (for me personally) then when I was free to go out into the world on my own I kissed (just kissed!... For the most part) way more frogs than I should have because suddenly I had more freedom and attention than I knew what to do with, lol. I was at least single again by that point though XD I do like Neal but I hope she finds the courage to let him go; she's not being fair to him and staying with him isn't doing her any good.<br /><br />Since I've only just caught up and not commented since last year; When I saw that Evangeline won the heir vote I was tres disappointed. Em seems like a fun and mischievous character, plus it's been a while since we had a guy heir. :( BUT... Evangeline's really growing on me and I really feel for her, especially since I can sort of relate to her story :) it's sad to think that she'll be forever alone thanks to her roll :'( <br /><br />PS. Wow, mystery man at the party (did he have a name? I forget) turned out to be a huge dick! Another thing I was wrong about, I thought she might end up being bowled over by him >_< Can't wait for the next installment! missroxorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06972273110900601502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597953151679135809.post-61248686766315847952013-06-01T13:19:51.317-07:002013-06-01T13:19:51.317-07:00KIERAN! *squeals*
D'aww, I seriously can'...KIERAN! *squeals*<br /><br />D'aww, I seriously can't stop smiling! I loved it. All of it. Their friendship and dialogue, how they met... It was perfect. :D Thanks for using him. <3<br /><br />Poor Evangeline. She has some serious issues to work through. I loved Kieran's advice. I really hope she listens to him too, especially the line about "You need to figure out who you are and what you want. For yourself." That's exactly what I would say to her, if she asked me, lol.<br /><br />I really like Evangeline as a character though. She seems confused and a bit lost at times, but she's still young and has time to figure it out. And, most importantly, her heart is in the right place I think. She's not sleeping around in order to hurt Neal or her father or anyone else- She just doesn't know what she wants yet. Honestly, her whole situation feels very realistic to me.<br /><br />Great chapter! I can't wait for part 2. :)Buckleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15791098360536318915noreply@blogger.com